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Unit 4 He said I was hard-working.书面表达

发布:jetshing    时间:2009-04-17 23:24:33     浏览:4069次    [划词翻译已启用]

你的朋友小凡(Xiaofan)英语比较差,他拿了一封英文信给你看。原来这是他刚通过学校英语学习中心交到一个美国笔友Mike的来信。请你先阅读这封来信,然后根据小凡的成绩单,帮助小凡完成给Mike的回信,告诉他小凡的学习情况以及老师对小凡的评语。(字数:100词左右)

 

Dear Xiaofan,

How are you? I'm so glad to have a new pen pal in China. I'm 14 years old and I live in New York.

I want to tell you more about my studies here so you can know me better. I finished my end-of-year exams last week and got my report card today. Luckily I did well in most of my school subjects this semester. I had a really hard time with science last semester, but I did much better this time. My science teacher said that I was very hard-working. Another exciting result was in math. My math teacher said I was very smart and careful. Actually I got the highest score in the test. One disappointing result was in French. My French teacher said I could do better.

Well, that's all the news I have for now. Please write soon and tell me about your studies.

Yours,

Mike

 

提示:小凡的成绩单如下表。回信的开头和结尾已经写好了。

 

科目

分数

教师评语

语文

A

你的作文写得非常好,希望你继续努力!

数学

A

你很聪明,不过还得再细心一些。

英语

C

你一直都很努力,希望你多听,多说。

物理

B

物理可能有一点难,但我更相信你的聪明和努力!

科学

A

你已经很优秀了,但你还可以更优秀。

历史

A

除了课本,你还可以多读些历史故事。

 

Dear Mike,

Thank you very much for your letter! I'm the same age as you and I live in Nanjing.

I would love to tell you more about my school life here, but my English is not that good. And I'm afraid that I can't express myself clearly.

 

 

 

I think I will continue to work hard on all my school subjects, especially on my English. Could you give me some advice on learning the language?

Yours,

Xiaofan

 

参考范文:

Dear Mike,

Thank you very much for your letter! I'm the same age as you and I live in Nanjing.

I would love to tell you more about my school life here, but my English is not that good. And I'm so afraid that I can't express myself clearly.

I got an A in Chinese. My teacher thought that my essay writing was very good. I also got As in Math, Science, and History, but I need to continue to improve in those subjects. My history teacher encouraged me to read more stories, and I need to pay attention to the small things in math! I didn't do quite as well in Physics. I got a B, but my teacher said that she has confidence that I can do better. My worst mark was a C in English. Language is very difficult for me, but I know if I keep working hard, I can do much better.

I think I will continue to work hard on all my subjects, especially on my English. Could you give me some advice on learning the language?

Yours,

Xiaofan


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